chapter 1 [COVER]

posted August 22nd, 2009, 8:42 am


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August 22nd, 2009, 9:04 am

d.ii

I really need to stop procrastinating lol
I promise the actual story will start on the next page
as for now, enjoy this boring idkwhat page lmao *shot*
...
oh and can anyone tell me where to get some nice screentones? *A*

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August 22nd, 2009, 9:24 am

d.ii

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@VampireKiss
ahahah thank you >v<
please do <3

@P!K
lol that's ok! *A*
awww hahah really? thank you so much! I tried my best to make it look decent xD <3
tehehe you're welcome~ (max is so adorable btw *u* )

@Hokaru
hurhurhur not as pretty as you *shot*
(ahh! thank you so much! lol yes it helps..A LOT~ D: )
ofcourse I remember you bby ;u;
you're awesome

@xstardustx
lmao thank you so much~ lol he doesn't deserve any fangirls ;u;

@WalkedAway
why thank you~ lol I don't know D8
I made those patterns on the butterflies so that it doesn't look plain >v<
yay thank youu TTuTT
aww you're too kind.. my art doesn't look pro at all
thanks again! <3

@Archie The RedCat
OMG I'm really honored to hear that from youu *ngefans*
thank you!

@HaKu10
thank you so much! *A*

@renpao
yes I did <3
lol it isn't but thank you so much for saying that lol
uhh I don't really know.. I just put it randomly xD
thank you so much for telling me *A*
I've checked the site and it's really useful

@Klona
I'm using photoshop actually xD (but I always wanted to try using SAI D: )
uwaaa thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that ;u;

@hiruda
lol thank you xD
but you'll regret saying that soon *shot*
jasgahsjk thank you so much ( I didn't know the have screentones in DA lol)

@Kaiya-chii
yayy please do <3

@gizumimipichu
thank you so muchh >u<

@Koori-chan
lmao but his personality isn't OTL
thank you so much koori-chan
I think your toning is much better than mine .__.;;

@animegamer123
NOT. lol
ahh! thank you so much for faving <3

@baeduxai
thank youu~

@tenshi
jkasdghafkas WHUT AHHHHHH I should have changed the banner *embarrassed*
I didn't know you were here too ;A;
thank you so much tenshi~ I'm so happy to hear that from you~ <3<3<3

@sorakari
ahhhh ketemu lg lolol
mungkin...mungkin kita ditakdirkan bersama~ *A* *dibacok*

@FanFantasy
wahh thank you so much~ they're very helpful >u<

@fish out of water
thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that ;A;

@Ashka-chan
awww thank youu >w<
I'm very happy to hear that~

@ToxikStars
thank you!
I'm sorry lol I'll try to update as soon as my scanner is fixed~ (my scanner is broken OTL)

@Pulitz-kun
lol really? 8D;;
maybe it looks like there's alot because of my replies oAo;;
thank you so muchh!

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August 22nd, 2009, 9:18 am

VampireKiss

pwetty~~~
i'd really like to read the story <3

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August 22nd, 2009, 9:40 am

Hokaru

omg so prettyyyy
( and uh..i usually get screentones from http://psychobob.xepher.net/screentonez/ if that helps...? OTL )

also whut you remember me lol dsf;ljk

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August 22nd, 2009, 9:44 am

xstardustx

O-oh gawd. ;A; He looks so pretty. I just might start fangirling over him. Pfft, anyway, I like his hair. :3 'Tis pretty-looking.

Fwa~ I love the shading~!

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August 22nd, 2009, 10:27 am

WalkedAway

oh, woow *o*
I love the way you tone!! fff-- howww??
and again with the butterflies--
-evies-

I can't wait to read the story~ It looks interesting, plus you have really pro-looking art ;u;b
edit: oh, and I second Hokaru for the screentones link O:

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view Archie The RedCat's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 12:42 pm

Archie The RedCat

please give us more pages! you are goood.. XD

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view HaKu10's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 1:02 pm

HaKu10

Wow, what a beautiful page! You've done a great job! Keep it up! ^^

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view renpao's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 3:14 pm

renpao

You updated! :D

And I agree with everyone else: this is so pro. ;__; How do you tone? How do you make it look so pro? *wants to know* <3

Oh, and I agree with Hokaru. They have tons of screentones you can use, but if you want more, you can just type "screentones" in google and you easily choose from the list. :D

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view Klona's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 3:20 pm

Klona

Do you use X Painter or Sai? >.< Very admirable lines and colouring..

Totally love your comic/manga<3

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view hiruda's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 6:10 pm

hiruda

o man he is suuucchhh a hottie * W *

<3 u could check screentone.deviantart.com

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view Kaiya-chii's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 8:38 pm

Kaiya-chii

I'm sooo looking forward to this <3

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view gizumimipichu's profile

August 22nd, 2009, 9:24 pm

gizumimipichu

Awww nice cover page! He looks really cool! XD

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view Koori-chan's profile

August 23rd, 2009, 12:32 am

Koori-chan

Woah!!! He looks sooo cool!!
I really love how you tone. It really looks like a pro O_o

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view animegamer123's profile

August 26th, 2009, 11:53 am

animegamer123

HOTTIE! lol
I like how the pages look -black to tone contrast-^^ faves

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view baeduxai's profile

August 29th, 2009, 3:45 pm

baeduxai

:O it's beautiful.

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view Kawaii_tenshi's profile

August 31st, 2009, 3:36 am

Kawaii_tenshi

ahfaehfje diiiii, this is tenshi :'D - is a really goos stalker lmao- I immediately knew this was you when I saw the banner *u*
Holy crap, this comic looks so amazing and professional so far! I can't wait to see the next pages
The toning is really nice too~ You're so amazing at everythingggg *u*

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view sorakari's profile

August 31st, 2009, 11:41 am

sorakari

omggg its you~~~~! >XD
this is ryoukari/sorakawa~~~
LOL rasannya ketemu mlulu nih akhir2 ini >XDD <3 instant fav!!

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August 31st, 2009, 10:48 pm

FanFantasy

Oh, if you want screentones, I suggest "screentones" on deviant art! They have a heck of a lot of stuff.

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view fish out of water's profile

September 5th, 2009, 2:33 am

fish out of water

Your art style is amazing! I can't wait for the next update! X3

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view Ashka-chan's profile

September 6th, 2009, 2:49 pm

Ashka-chan

You have a very nice style ^^
The story sound interesting too
Can't wait the next update~ <3

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view ToxikStars's profile

September 10th, 2009, 2:56 pm

ToxikStars

Very Nice.
I love this art style, I really wish there was more to read.....

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view Pulitz-kun's profile

September 11th, 2009, 4:58 pm

Pulitz-kun

you've got alot of comments here -maybe a page please ;_;-
JK
But I too like your linework and your coloring rocks!

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